Gaia Origins: The Hunter Clans page 1

It's a good start. As someone who has a professional comic book artist for a professor, I would suggest changing the font. Cursive should be used for titles or to begin a sentence. After that it should be easier to read. Please don't say, this is just for fun, or its my style or something like that. I'm truly trying to help you. I had nice people give me critique on my comics when I was younger and I ignored them and I regret it. Especially because I ignored them because I thought there's no way I'll be doing this for a living, it's just a hobby. Yet, here I am, doing it for a living. So, you never know with you, too!